My Visit to the Writing Center

I went to the writing center to get suggestions on my literary analysis on the short story, "At Sea" by Guy de Maupassant. My writing fellow Mrs. Spaht helped me tremendously. She expressed to me that I needed better transitions as well as better sentence structure. I completely agreed with her about the revisions that I would need to improve my literary analysis.

First, she told me to read the story out loud to her so she could suggest revisions. She said to highlight the errors that I found as I read. This helped me a lot because I could put the sentences in my own words as I read. The thing I liked most about my visit to the Writing Center was that she gave me suggestions, not demands to help revise my paper.